Demo transcript. Five illustrative examples, each shown as an original draft, visible changes, and a rewrite.
LinkedIn. Original: Kairoset now exports up to 50,000 records in one batch, representing a significant milestone in our journey. It is important to note that the previous limit was 5,000 records per batch, underscoring our commitment to continuous improvement. Writing score: 77. Lower is better.
LinkedIn. Changes: the film strikes through removed words and underlines additions. Original: Kairoset now exports up to 50,000 records in one batch, representing a significant milestone in our journey. It is important to note that the previous limit was 5,000 records per batch, underscoring our commitment to continuous improvement. Rewrite: Kairoset now exports up to 50,000 records in one batch. The previous limit was 5,000 records per batch.
LinkedIn. Rewrite: Kairoset now exports up to 50,000 records in one batch. The previous limit was 5,000 records per batch. Writing score: 15.2. Lower is better.
Document. Original: As we move forward, actionable next steps include Maya taking ownership of the pricing review. It is important to note that the team will review her proposal on Friday before making a decision. Writing score: 92.7. Lower is better.
Document. Changes: the film strikes through removed words and underlines additions. Original: As we move forward, actionable next steps include Maya taking ownership of the pricing review. It is important to note that the team will review her proposal on Friday before making a decision. Rewrite: Maya owns the pricing review. The team will review her proposal on Friday before it makes a decision.
Document. Rewrite: Maya owns the pricing review. The team will review her proposal on Friday before it makes a decision. Writing score: 9.5. Lower is better.
Blog. Original: In today's fast-paced digital landscape, it is essential to understand the importance of clear onboarding. Our trial followed 24 new hires for two weeks. Twelve needed help finding the expense form, highlighting an opportunity for improvement. Writing score: 77.8. Lower is better.
Blog. Changes: the film strikes through removed words and underlines additions. Original: In today's fast-paced digital landscape, it is essential to understand the importance of clear onboarding. Our trial followed 24 new hires for two weeks. Twelve needed help finding the expense form, highlighting an opportunity for improvement. Rewrite: Twelve of 24 new hires needed help finding the expense form. Our trial followed them for two weeks.
Blog. Rewrite: Twelve of 24 new hires needed help finding the expense form. Our trial followed them for two weeks. Writing score: 13.3. Lower is better.
Research paper. Original: It is worth noting that our observational study of 32 teams found an association between shorter meetings and fewer reported delays. These findings offer valuable insights; the small sample does not establish causation. Writing score: 79.3. Lower is better.
Research paper. Changes: the film strikes through removed words and underlines additions. Original: It is worth noting that our observational study of 32 teams found an association between shorter meetings and fewer reported delays. These findings offer valuable insights; the small sample does not establish causation. Rewrite: In our observational study of 32 teams, shorter meetings were associated with fewer reported delays. The small sample does not establish causation.
Research paper. Rewrite: In our observational study of 32 teams, shorter meetings were associated with fewer reported delays. The small sample does not establish causation. Writing score: 9.5. Lower is better.
Email. Original: I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to reach out and circle back on the contract. Please send your comments by Thursday so we can sign on Monday. Thank you in advance. Writing score: 96.3. Lower is better.
Email. Changes: the film strikes through removed words and underlines additions. Original: I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to reach out and circle back on the contract. Please send your comments by Thursday so we can sign on Monday. Thank you in advance. Rewrite: Please send your comments on the contract by Thursday so we can sign on Monday. Thank you in advance.
Email. Rewrite: Please send your comments on the contract by Thursday so we can sign on Monday. Thank you in advance. Writing score: 9.5. Lower is better.